A slow pour. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing such a deeply personal experience.
I particularly enjoyed how you wove in the death of your baba with your burgeoning new life with Amelia and grounded it in a place that is both familiar and foreign to you. The religion tie in was a cherry on top and I appreciate the education there!
This was a great read. I appreciate your pacing—it feels intuitive, like we experience the day and the thoughts/feelings with you. Your writing feels accessible and attentive to important, everyday experiences that regular people have. I want to read more work like this. Thank you
A slow pour. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing such a deeply personal experience.
I particularly enjoyed how you wove in the death of your baba with your burgeoning new life with Amelia and grounded it in a place that is both familiar and foreign to you. The religion tie in was a cherry on top and I appreciate the education there!
Looking forward to the next part.
Thank you man, I appreciate it
This was a great read. I appreciate your pacing—it feels intuitive, like we experience the day and the thoughts/feelings with you. Your writing feels accessible and attentive to important, everyday experiences that regular people have. I want to read more work like this. Thank you